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Question: Want to tell me what you think of this poem that I just wrote!?
I seem to be talented at adding to my list of mistakes;
I say things impulsively!.!.!. and, afterwards my heart aches!.
Always wishing that I could put those words back in my head;
Enjoying the introspection, after words I shouldn't have said!.
Wishing that my tongue had an eraser!.!.!. that I spoke in lead!.
Regretting expressing thoughts that weren't much of myself!.
Feeling that my true self is hidden from those I love!.!.!.too often;
When, at last, I review words of my past!.!.!.
I'm convinced!.!.!. that I must just have been looking for a coffin!.
Knowing how often I've thought of putting a bullet in my head;
Showing what I truly think too slowly!.!.!.
Wondering when they'll catch up; words I've mistakenly said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i really like this poem!.
i can relate to it!.
i think everyone can at some time!.!.!.
its good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it until i got to coffin!.!.!.!.hated it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its pree good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com