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Question: A poem maybe youd care to rate!?
Sitting on my front steps
Thinking of you
Watching the sunset
Go out of view
Now its gone
Nothing in sight
The days are too long
It turns to night
And we look
At the same night sky
Hoping, maybe
The sun will not rise
So we don’t have to spend
Another day apart
We are not friends
Since you broke my heart
But I know I’m on your mind
Im doing fine
I just seem to find
That your also on mine
i havent added punctuation and edited yet i know the flows a little off but please tell me what you think of the poem itself
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's like delicious icing!. A 7-8 for that!. It could use some depth though, some specifics!. Like when you say "we are not friends, since you broke my heart" That right there stopped me dead in my tracks!. There was something else lurking under those words, and i wanted to discover that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow for only being 12 you have some very deep thoughts I'm gonna give it like a 7!.5 good job lol I've been writing poems lately too and am finding it as a good way to vent lol i am gonna add you to my contacts i liked you poem allot :DWww@QuestionHome@Com
for 12 thats freaken good!. i give it a 10 cuz it is so romantic (p!.s!. i am a tom girl so its hard to make me be like a girl)
sept bugsWww@QuestionHome@Com
I would rate your poem as a 8 because it contains a lot of creative imagery about sunsets and at night great poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
oohh, nice!! 8!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its neat but not genuine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it!.!.!.!.!.very cute :D
id say its a 9!.!.!.!.!.youre really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Loved it
I'll give you a 9:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats awesome
thats definitely a 10
r u sure ur 12!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
woahh,
that's really good =]]
i vote a 9!=]Www@QuestionHome@Com