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Question: Short Poem About My Dad!?
I miss him!.!.!.
is that alright!?
All I ever do now is cry at night!.!.!.
wishing that he never left my sight!.
Sheding these tears!.!.!.
of my special years!.
I listen to songs he would sing, and reminise to EARTH, WIND, AND FIRE-ALWAYS AND FOREVER!.
Those words they sang!.!.!.
that he sang to me when I was little!.!.!.
can't help but miss him and think!.
He has hurt me and left me in pain!.!.!.
but still without him I wouldn't have been me!.
PLEASE ONLY POSOTIVE COMMENTS!
I made this quick poem about my dad!.!.!.I miss him!.!.!.I haven't seen him in 2 years!. ;[ ;[ ;[ ;[ ;[ ;[Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OMG! that is such a awesome poem!. honestly it is, because your clearly showing your emotions and how you feel about him and it shows your emotions and everything that you are going through cuz u miss him!. great job and hope you see him soon (:Www@QuestionHome@Com
You know tha poem almost, almost made me cry but the fact that it got me far towards it is sincere!. Well done for writing a concise emotional poem!. :-oWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's emotional, could use imagery, metaphors, and meteringWww@QuestionHome@Com
Thought it was a very nice emotional and well written poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, this is a really good poem!. I could actually connect with it and experience your feelings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Thats very sweet and emotional!. I'm sure if you email that to your dad than he will get all teary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
aww, tht made me cry a lil bit!.!.!. :] i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like this!.!.its very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com