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Question: Rate my poem from 1-10!? 1 is bad 10 is awesome!?
The Heart
the heart the heart of love it's as beautiful as a dove
so delighted feel excited extend the love and have relation
but then the love doesn't work out and you think about what
what do you do!? what do you say and then you tell the
person to break their heart away but remember the heart is
like water you can fall into it you can drown into it but
you can't live without it
I'm only 14 how is it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I give it a 5!.
I thought it was nice, just needs fine tunning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad at all - good job! Keep writing!

9 or 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I give it six out of ten!. Not bad!

Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com