Is this a good second try for a beginner?

Question: Is this a good second try for a beginner!?

“Somthin’ I can’t tell”

Bending lower to the ground
To hear the sounds of the prancing proceedings
Parade of animals on sticks
Lifted so they will not fall
Up and down the streets of schooled sanctuary
There is more here than meets the eyes
More to hear than meets the ears
Can we go home!? I am sick of this place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Huh!? I love it that it is self-awear!. It is good, I mean the flow and all but I do not see what is there to be seen!.!.!. I will be spending some time trying to figure it out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com