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Stacked so high The footsteps that passed Connected Feelings, history The hunters Searching, taking food Are hunted Bones lay witness too Farmers now Sowing, reaping food Starving cold Sod houses buried Merchants sell Building, glass and stone Serving coin Poor are pushed away Angels dwell Puzzled, footsteps here That was man!? History echoesWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Well written! We humans have a short lease on this land, don't we!? I appreciate the economy of words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This poem is so very thoughtful and intriguing!. It will all come down to the echoes of footsteps when man, or each man, leaves this earth!. There is much drama and pathos invoked with your spare, well-chosen words!. I love many of the lines!. "Bones lay witness " and "Puzzled, footsteps here" are as great as poetry gets!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com My interpretation is that the core of human existance remains unchanged through all walks of life!. Very interesting and enjoyable readWww@QuestionHome@Com History is for the Angels, man is to live it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com to walk backwards into time without un- blinded illusions would birth compassion of natural orderWww@QuestionHome@Com Sweetly calling, life always was and remains!. Reflective words, Neon Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com You have played a film on the circles of life!. You are an Academy Award Winning Director!Www@QuestionHome@Com Because of my passion with genealogy, this said quite a bit to me!. Well done, I enjoyed wandering through the lines!Www@QuestionHome@Com |