Last of the nite I am beat. Hope you enjoy this poem. comments.?

Question: Last of the nite I am beat!. Hope you enjoy this poem!. comments!.!?

"betrayed"

I close my eyes,
thinking of you!.
I see us together!.
The end I feel,
is closing in!.
Or have you
changed your mind!.

You help me
see things clearly!.
See what's wrong or right!.
I don't want to
live without you,
I don't know what to say!.

When I feel
all alone!.
No one seems
to care!.
This world is misery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it is better,dark prince!.
i like it!.
i find u interested in writing poems!.
that is good
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