What do you think of this chicken poem?

Question: What do you think of this chicken poem!?

Snidely is a DADDY!!
And a daddy he be!
This cup of Good Morning!
Cheer is written by me!

Cup-o-coffee-doodle!
Doodle-this-cigarette!
Delete this poem and I'll
Shout it from a Minarette!

Enough of this twaddle!
Saturday morning shines!
Good Morning is alive!
Now, delete THESE lines!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Snidely praising her daddy and then threatening if the poem is deleted, but relenting on a satuday morning!. Well Good Morning!. But all this makes me chicken hearted!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but think there are a few too many syllables!. To me, it reads better dropping the first "Good", the second "this", and the second "Good"!. I'd also drop the exclamation point from line 3!. But as I said, I do like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nahhh!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it's fine the way it is A quick easy read!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Now you'll have to contend with Father & Son!!! !.!.!.!.!.!.!.

Thanks for making a Bright & Cheery Saturday morning & Good Luck!!!

Even Snidely has grown!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poor Snidely! Finally figured out how to peck a few verses and he gets deleted!! THE NERVE I TELL YOU!!
Good morning again!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cute little Snidely's!. Just what we need!. Good Morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a lovely poem for me this afternoon light reading not to intense!. I have been awake all night then had to put in 7hrs!. at the grindstone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanks for this lovely and fun morning poem about snidely !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good Afternoon! I do not understand the deleting of poems!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty good but not your best work, don't get me wrong I still like it and love your talentWww@QuestionHome@Com

coak good
sorry, Quite goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

a very energetic poem! glad you seem to be having a good day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it as always!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. For some reason, it makes me hungry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!.did you just had too much of coffee!? A very energetic good morning poem we have here!.!.!.!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Big grin!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Glad he's got his gender back! GM to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com