What do you think of this poem? I am 13 and love to write!!!?

Question: What do you think of this poem!? I am 13 and love to write!!!!?

They fly by in scintillating colors
Realize that the effervescent mood is
Due only to the Cherryblossom summers
And Antarctic winters
In which our life changed forever
But not thiers!.

Abasement of theories
Degradation of thoughts
I'm abashed to declare
That I am thought so little of!.

Discovered so pensively,
Aquired so easily,
And yet, so grueling to find
In any party off of the streetWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

First stanza is understandable after a thought!. The pronouns in the first stanza are plural, in the second singular!.

In the third no reference to whom to find(tho there is assumption) for discovery, aquiring, and who's party!.

Their articulation is good, descriptions of time of life requires some thought tho there is clarity in with the Pronoun "I" in the second stanza!.

Not bad, needs some rework!. Keep it up and have a selection of poems you can submit some lighter, a few less personal, few with a personal look at a subject(which can include yourself)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow you did a great job!.!.!.I don't know many 13 year olds who take much intrest in writing or do such a good job!.!.!.

could you please answer my poetry question What do you think of this poem!? Title suggestions please!?Www@QuestionHome@Com