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Question: Does this poem make sence!?
i don't know if this poem works!. any advice!?

I want to be a model daughter
No messing up
No cute boy getting in my head
No evil cat
No paranoia dad
Instead, I’m stuck with a crime scene
A crime scene of murder and lies
And my cute boy is in the middle
What happened to my normal summer!?
Normal model daughter
Of course, not, instead I steal a limousine
I don’t want his
I want to be a model daughter
I nice, quiet girl
So much for model
And so much for normalWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If I may make a suggestion!?

I want to be a model daughter
No messing up
No cute boy getting in my head
No evil cat
No paranoia dad
!.!.!. Instead I steal a limousine
and I’m stuck with a crime scene
A crime scene of murder and lies
And my cute boy is in the middle
What happened to my normal summer!?
!.!.!.So much for model
And so much for normal
Normal model daughter
!.!.!.What happened!.!.!.dad!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thought the poem was interesting and emotional!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Intresting and cool but in the third line from the bottom is it suppose to be A nice, quiet girl!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ummm!.!.!.!. i guess its ok!! haha lolWww@QuestionHome@Com