What do you think of this poem? (I know it's not too great)?

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Question:

Why now!?

You still won't
answer questions,
yet somehow I am supposed
to answer all of yours!.

If you really cared,
you might have noticed that my life
has been in full view-
my world on display-
but you were busy!.
You were wrapped up in you!.
Nothing of mine merited your acknowledgement!.
Your sympathy!.
Your ear!.

And suddenly it's supposed to be the way it was before!? Because now you say so!?

Not likely!.
Not without some major damage control!.
And then!?

Not likely still!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i dont know what it is about these poems but they move me and inspire me to write more myself, the only problem is your ending it is to bland try to make a new one then it will go with the rest of your poem, your poems could melt a persons heartWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds more like a good emo song than poetry!. Once again, just being honest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com