Yeah, I think I got the 7-7-6-6 AABB scheme perfect!. Tell me if I need to explain any of the things I'm trying to adress!. Yeah, I know I posted this like 3 times, but this time I think I'm done with it! Enjoy!
Through My Eyes
The taste of holy waters
The touch of blessed daughters
Within their godly sea
Gave something new to me
My! The World has been changed
His heart, it slows, now deranged
Pain, anguish, death, desire
Black blood, lake of fire
Horns of war deafen my ear
Hungry children bring a tear
Smoky fumes flying free
This is wrong, don't you see!?
O' the handsome Autumn leaves
Be gone my last thinning trees
Scorching heat burns my skin
Plants full of piggish men
The World's heart, sadly stricken
Chest pounding, start to sicken
Breath fading, heart squeezing
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