Another short one, do you like it?

Question: Another short one, do you like it!?

This pool of colours, tells a tale,
Once in bloom, now rotting grey!.
With yellow spots that linger stale,
To fade to mother's dying pray!.
And reddened snow, that scatters dirt,
To rot the midnight lakes of smirk!.
For she has come by lonely shore,
To place a wreath upon my head,
She has come to kiss me dead!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This is excellent and chilling, only bereft of a title and the fourth line does not work!. I understand the sense you are trying to make, but the grammatical context ruins the meaning of the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com