Is this a good alliterative poem??

Question: Is this a good alliterative poem!?!?

Flare

Game of gaining glamour and glory
glowing greatly in the crowd of ghosts
showing some grief yet glittering gracefully
among the skies growing greater and greater!.

Is this an alliterative poem!?!? does it make sense and is it good!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is definitely an alliterative poem!. But the main point of the poem is unclear!. Ghosts!?Cloudy Sky's!? You have to really revise the poem so it is a story and just a list of alliterative words!. Keep up on trying!. You might surprise yourself with an masterpiece one day=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, its good, really good actualy!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com