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Sometimes it rains
Other it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
I know now it's true
That you cant be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can't stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
My mind is a haze
If we only could be
We'd have sunshiny days


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Gray ceiling on the earth
Lasted for a while
I only long to see
Again your sweet smile

But you've gone
Somewhere in these walls
I get along
But i falter and fall

As your memory fades
I seem to find
Through the deep waters i wade
Some memories lodged in my mind

Each smile
Each kiss
Think awhile
And i miss

Even more
the scent of your hair
Each before
memories i cant bear

I still blame myself
For that awful crash
To my knees i fall
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WOW !!!! that was amazing! i loved them and whoever doesn't needs to reread them i can really relate to them and the way you put so much emotion gets me i really really really like them both you should be proud of yourself that you can write that well god if someone wrote this for me i would be so in love w/ them i LOVED THEM !!!! you know if you ever wanna share ideas you can email meWww@QuestionHome@Com

The first one is Great, As so the Second!. I absoulutly love the Rythym!.!.!.!.Great Ryhming too!. Keep up the Wonderful Work!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The rhyme in the second one was a little "guessy" and by "guessy" I mean that I could guess what word you were going to use to complete the rhyme by only reading the first!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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