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by Dag Drahmr She lay on the floor, as if a sleep!. A fly buzzes her, lightly bushes her ear!. She slowly raise her head, sees him climb high in the air!. She lays back down, he makes another pass!. From on her side to three foot, she slaps him to the ground!. She looks at him there, steps on him and lays down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your poem is vivid and very cute!. Here is one for my cat Jasper (a little tuxedo female)!. "Jasper, the Hunter" While relaxing in my living room, a buzzing foretells impending doom!. An acrobatic dash, tuxedo flash a jump and leap off my window sill, the swift hunter lands her kill!. The victim plummets to the ground and is devoured without trace or sound!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It lay on the floor, as if a awake!. A giant passes it, lightly brushes its ear!. It slowly raise its head, sees it almighty high above the air!. It lays back down, Giant makes another pass!. From its body to all its soul, it slaps the giant to the ground, it thinks!. Giant looks at it there, Cradles it on and lays it down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A nice tale described with the detail to bring you in to the scene!. Some edits: L2 asleep L4 raises or raised L9 feet instead of footWww@QuestionHome@Com mine would just watch it and go back to sleep!. but she is so great!. i love her alot!. she never lets me down or be lonely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com that was nice! roses are red/violets are blue/hilda missed the cat box/i wish that wasnt true!Www@QuestionHome@Com My cat would have eaten the fly after she stepped on it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Good for Coco! Mine are sleeping, well out of the rain!.!.!.dreaming of massive crows! My three are: Foxy, Kelly and Sock (it to me)!. All were Feral!.!.!.not now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, I'm in love with Coco or Fat Cat!.Poems of my six friends to come!.Www@QuestionHome@Com My cat is he- It's name is Mishu! I love him!I like your poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com |