The Muse dropped in for a short visit, and whither goest the Muse, thither I must follow!.
You are the apple of my eye,
You are the kumquat of my kidney!.
I love you more than pie,
From here all the way to Sydney!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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You are the apple of my eye, You are the kumquat of my kidney!. I love you more than pie, From here all the way to Sydney!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You are the Tangerine of my spleen the avocado of my bravado I wish that I could tell you more so maybe we will talk tomorrow I think your Muse thithered to my mouse!.!.!. I have a bemused computer appliance!Www@QuestionHome@Com Kumquat May this is my offer!.!.!.!. You are the peach in my blanc mange The lemon in my meringue The pips in my French Or-ange You're more exotic than east Da-nang You are sweet as the herbs in my quiche As blended as the squash in my fridge More delightful than a mascerating peach As splendid as the great London BridgeWww@QuestionHome@Com line 1-cliche line 3-cliche rework poems dont have to rhyme express what you want to say without the rhyming because It's not working that well for this poem!. Just make sure the beat and the flow is consistent the beat doesnt flow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Facetious are we!? L! cliche 8 L2 kumquat humor 9 L3 not saying much unless pie addict 6 L4 relevance stretched 8 As I munch my apple 6 an eye your pome 4 my mind plans an answer 6 apple 1 and!? 4 Overall, not bad for a kumquat poem! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com And when they sing their opera, I will return to you, switch direction and affection to that place called TimbuktuWww@QuestionHome@Com Great use of rhyme!. Very funny!. I liked it!. Two thumbs up!. Fun for the family, and kids of all ages!. This movie will have you laughing all the way home!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Maybe i should drop by for a short visit to Sydney sometimes!.!.!. It's not that far from where i live! Just an 8hours' flight!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com I checked the rules!. "One star for each kumquat!."Www@QuestionHome@Com A real peach of a poem A plum of rhyming verse Other poets: you showed 'em At your abundance of talent they curse!Www@QuestionHome@Com great!.!.!.!. ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com She sounds delicious!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think I'll go get something to eat !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |