i already posted this but i wanted more input PLEASE
Gray ceiling on the earth
Lasted for a while
I only long to see
Again your sweet smile
But you've gone
Somewhere in these walls
I get along
But i falter and fall
As your memory fades
I seem to find
Through the deep waters i wade
Some memories lodged in my mind
Each smile
Each kiss
Think awhile
And i miss
Even more
the scent of your hair
Each before
memories i cant bear
I still blame myself
For that awful crash
To my knees i fall
You were gone too fast =(
its not done but please rate my rough rough draft
1--10 or a b c d f any constructive criticism is very very welcome
=)
-ninja-
ps im only in jr highWww@QuestionHome@Com