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Question: Is this poem!?
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on a sunspilled field
in the shadow of a blimp
we anoint the great
ballgamers
as they preen and primp
their manliness is megaphoned
so all will understand
no fake, no fluke, no wimp
no ordinary man…
the ball and his equipment
all neatly uniformed

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I have never understood taking a ball and!.!.!.tossing it into a basket, hitting it with a bat, socking it with an iron, kicking it into a net, smacking it over a net, carrying it over a goal line, ad infinitem!. What is it with men and balls!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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What's there is great, but it doesn't sound complete!. The last two lines feel like they're leading into more poetry (maybe about the game and how it relates to life) but it seems like it was just sorta cut off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

American Football is what I obtained from your slight piece!.

For me the piece needs more!.

I feel as though I am being left on the five yard line while my team is on the fifty!.

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Yea, it's a great poem!. You took me to an all together different part of the ball game!. Do they really preen and primp!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Superbowl SundayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. The ball is in your court!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah!. This is stanza 1 only, right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

They are not water-walkers,those baseballers!.!.!.!.
Not much of a fan myself!.
Hey, what's with the cost of gas, anyway!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com