Yet another poem...........likable?

Question: Yet another poem!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.likable!?

See my skin peel away!.
See my Heart, it won't stay
Where you can see it very long!.

Hear it crying out for Love!.
It hasn't had enough,
It's grown colder all these years!.

I'm waiting,
For a Love I never said I needed!.
Hoping,
That someday you'll come and stop my bleeding!.
Knowing!.
That all I'm doing is simply feeding
Pain!.
It never goes away!.
With all these yesterdays
It stays the same!.

Tell the best and worst parts!.*Please and Thank you!*Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i didnt like the first two parts,
and the ending part sounded more like a song, but it was good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was really good!.!.!.the part i liked was when it said

"I'm waiting,
For a Love I never said I needed!.
Hoping,
That someday you'll come and stop my bleeding!.
Knowing!.
That all I'm doing is simply feeding"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it! but the ending is not so good!. say this

``it never gose away!.
with all of these loveless years,
it will always stay the same!.``

everything else gives me a vistion of what ur saying!. GOOD JOB!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know better - never goes - thank god is a game to you in real life you should never love and be so fatalistic!. Love is bigger and stronger - you'll seeWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! Especially this part:

Pain!.
It never goes away!.
With all these yesterdays
It stays the same!.

I like how you phrased it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com