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Question: !.!.!.!.!.!.!.my!.!.!.poem!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
what do you think of this poem!?!?
i'm almost done
i can see the light in the end of my way
but i just can't except that
i can really get there
i can't except that it wasn't along way
i'm Afraid that it's only
afake end
and i would have to start over againWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Well to me your poem seems unfinished to me!. It should have a clear ending, begining, & middle!. And a title!. It is a good start though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem stinks!.

Besides, the word is ACCEPT, not EXCEPT!. Don't they teach you anything in school these days!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmmmm why is afraid capitalizedWww@QuestionHome@Com