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A drop of Rain!. Are they to you Just the same!? All alone!. Not my choice !. Painful feelings Left unvoiced!. A happy Heart Turned to grey!. Is this the way That you say "I love you"!? Just want to know what you think!. I was young so be nice!.*smile*Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ooo I liked it!!.!.!.!. A lot!!!.!. a simple poem yet it holds a lot of emotions and personality!. Very nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is nicely written The first paragraph is about sadness The second not wanting to be alone without any choice The feelings are still painful though A happy heart has turned to stay Is this the way that you say I love you The final paragraph is joyful and happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked it! I know I can't rhyme in a poem; you did a nice job!Www@QuestionHome@Com wow, it waz goodWww@QuestionHome@Com |