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by Dag Drahmr A strange glow, low in the western sky!. A pale white haze, slowly drift on the breeze!. Dark bluegray clouds, lay like furrows in the sky!. Huge drops fall, make a stead beat on the concret!. Birds cry in the dimming light, fly for cover as rain pelt down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's a good poem but it is kind of confusing!. You give no clues onto what this thing is!. Is is a UFO!? The title is a great title because it explains the setting!. Thank you for posting, keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is always interesting to watch a storm develop and approach!. Boredom on the tractor often was broken by this pastime!. I liked the progression and images penned!. Somewhat confused on the spellings though!. Intentional!?Www@QuestionHome@Com concret"E" stead"Y" - unless its (sic) pelt(s) - its a tense change without the 's' and this chick doesn't know what she is talking about!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I LOVE how the sky looks before a good rainstorm!. This poem captures that moment perfectly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, exactly! And we finally have rain here!Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a good poem!. It takes us to the place and allows us to see!. I like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!.!. good imageryWww@QuestionHome@Com thats cool!! keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com |