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Question: Does Dorsimbra sound like some type of dance!?
DORSIMBRA

Being your slave, what should I do but tend
Upon the hours and times of your desire!?
I have no precious time at all to spend,
Nor services to do, till you require!.

You require a
Treat!? What type
Do you crave, my
Little one!?

I live only to serve your desire!.
However it does tire me quite well!.
Halting all my projects I turn to yours!.
Being your slave, what should I do but tend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You know we all ought to get to-gether and secretly write a Shakespearean play!. Get a forger to age the paper and TD can 'discover' this masterpiece hidden in a pot in an old antique shop!. (That way it won't be traced back to me!)
This is brilliant!.
Folks who don't take up these challenges don't know the agony they are missing (and the fun too)!.

I would replace
However it does tires me quite well
with
However it really buggers me out (perfect iambic pentameter)
(only joking)Www@QuestionHome@Com

No dance but Dorsi lost her bra! This I like in whatever form you call it!. An all to often occurence when one has pets!. My dog is now barking (only 1 bark per minute) trying to get me to go let him in!. So must go!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If it ain't, it sure fooled me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com