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Question: Will Siren like the poem I wrote to her!?
Siren Unchained
She sailed through thought of a darker dream
She gave to me
I watched as she drifts away while sailors raise their
horrored screams
A nightmare with a hollowed face
A gentle voice
cities around her
laid to waste
With one song she made men bleed
With a lullaby, rocks babes to sleep
And all the while
I watch her smile
As I sink beneath the sea
To her Siren Song…!.
I write this with the best of intentions to a dear friend of mine… by the name of the piece you all should know of who I speak… Blessed be, LarouxeBlackWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
How could I not like this Rouxe!? Your words are charming and thoughtful even though you assume here i have more power than I truly posses!.!.!. thank you for this os much, it warms my heart to see so many taking such a reaction to my work!.!.!. this is beautiful and!.!.!.!. I really don't know what more to say!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is an effort to praise one of the better poets I have seen on this sight!. I am sincerely sorry that your words do not at all do her any sort of justice whatsoever!. Perhaps your next effort will be slightly better, but only if you apply yourself, something that it seems you have yet to do!. I can only suggest that you go to the masters and until you have learned from them, desist in writing poems to honor those far more talented than yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, she will love the poem you wrote for her!. Everyone here is so caring, and sweet, and thoughtful!. I love the appreciation people have for one another here!. Good show, my friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow that is totally awesome and she is really going to love this so!.!.You really captured her mystery and her essence in this cool poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't listen
to the Lylac,
she's evil,
you know!.
Write from
the heart,
the soul,
and others
will feel
'da love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think it needs a lil improvement lik b more open nd use wrdsz 2 describe how u feel 2 make it more sophesticated nd more REALWww@QuestionHome@Com
I don't think she'll like it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
I think she'll LOVE it!
That's very nice of you!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com