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Question: Lat poem for the night !. Be brutally hinest!.!?
"I saw your face"
Looking up, see your visage,
Nothing there, imagination!.
Blink my eyes , look again!.
No one there, to my surprise!.
Mind is playing tricks today,
So much desire, you I see!.
Come and go, without a sound,
My heart to you perpetually bound!.
Reach out for you, in the night!.
Was it you, a trick of light!?
I feel your heat, still right here,
But i see, you're no where near!.
Come to me, my angel please!.
I'm begging, and I'm on my knees!.
Have I really, lost my mind,
I traipse the night, you to find!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is like a time when all i did was sleep because i was dreaming of this person that i knew but lost- i still dream the same thing but now i can't see or remember who it is and i am the one who is lostWww@QuestionHome@Com
Very good love story, only problem I had was that lines 1 thru 6 have no rhyme scheme, but from that point on it's made of of rhyming pairs!.
BTW, tomorrow the patch will move to the left eye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is better then the other one, I like it!. You put in a slight air of mystery which is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
beautiful love poem!.!.very romantic indeed!.!.!.hey who is she!.!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
this is the best u wrote !.!.!.thats is a beutiful poemWww@QuestionHome@Com