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Question: What do you think this writing!?
Covered Up
KH (C)2008
Blades Edge
Taps the dead flesh
Flowing out life
Drop by Drop
New life flows
river of life
life of blood
rattling of the door
questions of the ignorant
sharp tongue of hate
must hide this river
cover it up
for they don't understand
what life this river brings
cover up
make them blind
cover up
secret of life
I'm no English major!. I just occasionally write!. Would enjoy feed-back!. Good, Bad, and Stupid such are the different types of critics lol : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like the imagery the poem conjures up!. It's like the reader is in the poem, feeling it and breathing it!. That is the sign of a truly great writer!.
Keep up the brilliant work!.
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It's fine, but you don't use complete sentences!.
It would help the reader understand more if you wrote in complete sentences!.
I'm a bit of a writer myself=)
Some day I'll be famous, so look for my name=)
LilyWww@QuestionHome@Com
even though i dont unerstand half of what it means, it sounds realy interesting! i love all the details! the words u wrote are soooo educational! its realy good! iloved it!
( is it a poem!? a non- rhyming poem!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com
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that is absolutely wonderfulWww@QuestionHome@Com
******* rubbishWww@QuestionHome@Com
Your no english major!? really!? I''m so surprised cause your writing sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
good!.!.i like it!.!.!.nice use of words!.!.!.keep writing and posting for me to see :PWww@QuestionHome@Com
Good, but make sure u copyright stuff b4 u put good work like that on the internet!!!! Hope u become famous! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it is pretty cool, little dark & twisted I like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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