Comments on poem plzz.?

Question: Comments on poem plzz!.!?

i wrote at random

Everything is fire
The love I feel for you
Uncontrollable passion
Forbidden desire
My heart burns for you
The flames torturing me
Mocking meWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Hmmm interesting, so this poem then would be, the case of a pyromaniac (you) comparing her love and fascination with fire, to the passion she feels for another person!? Pyromaniacs often get in trouble, for setting things on fire, but they can't help but be attracted to it, they love the colors of the flame, the way it grows as it consumes what it burns!. It's beautiful yet, it destroys everything it touches, am I on the right wavelength here!? (I'm not a pyromaniac) But fire is fire, it's dangerous and can cause a lot of collateral damage!. If you're in love with someone who's dangerous, unkind, married or otherwise uninterested you can burned in a different way!. Falling for them can be as volatile and, damaging as fire!. That's a good bases for a poem!. I like it but, it needs more, detail!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds good ! I'm no professional but please do continue!.!. ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

very professional sounding, i'm inpressedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice!.:) I like it,very artistic!.And I like the randomness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you sound like your an obsessive person when you find loveWww@QuestionHome@Com

niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

its riilliii random!.!.!.!.!.
looks lyk u jus put da words in difrnt sentences!.!.!.!.!. no rythmWww@QuestionHome@Com

r u a guy r girl because that was wonderful I almost cried!Www@QuestionHome@Com

be careful they say that makes you wet the bedWww@QuestionHome@Com

really good!!
im pretty sure ur a wise person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com