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Question: A Poem - Just A Memory - Do You Like!?
We walk with hands joined
and legs in tandem
Gulls form a halo
following our path
Ocean breezes vie
for kisses on sand
The softness beneath
tempers our stepping
Lazy days are
favored embraces
As the sun departs
and meets the ocean
We will continue
our loving journeyWww@QuestionHome@Com
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I know the place!. Beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have been there and walked in that same sand with someone special!. No, not Marguerite, her name was Cecilia, and was know to all as Sissy!. We walked and talked until midnight, had a goodnight kiss, and never saw the other again!. Thank you for the memory!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, I do like it- I just love it!. It has tenderness and romance in the sensitive images, created from this lovely memory of yours!. I especially think "Gulls form a halo!.!.!.following our path" is a graceful image!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its good, but way too predictable!. I've heard stuff like this over and over and while I can relate to the emotions in this poem, I feel like words can never completely embody them!. It is too commonly usedWww@QuestionHome@Com
Walk on for the nights are even better!. A nice memory opened with your words!. Poems easy will never go out of favor!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes! very refreshing, Lovely line, "Lazy days are favored
embraces!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's a beautiful, tranquil, and loving memory!. We should all have memories like this one!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A great picture of a loving couple, well said!. mine is woodlands and sun rise!.Very good, I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
So peaceful and beautifully written my friend <3Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like this!. Keep it how you wrote it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like your poems!. It is a poem my memory would cherish!.
Thanks for sharing!. Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com
omg it sounds so romantic lol i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com
love it! you have talentWww@QuestionHome@Com
yes its beautiful!.!.even though i dont understand half of what your saying =))Www@QuestionHome@Com