OK i wrote a couple of love poems, I would like to know what some of u think!. My poems never ryhmy just to let u all know!. Rate them on a scale one to 10!.
And do u think I could get them published!?
1!.Sea of love
I am Lost,
Lost in the sea of love and dreams!.
I gently float down the sea,
The pure pink sea,
I dream of you,
About the love I have for you,
I wait for the sea to end,
But it never does,
I still am lost,
Lost in the sea of love for you
2!.Love Spell
Confused,
I love the one I love,
But is it true I love you too!?,
I'm I blind!?,
Have you blinded me!?,
You have put me under your spell,
How do I escepe from you,
I am looking for a way out,
For we can never be,
Let me go from under you spell,
I whisper please,
For I love another,
I have fallen under your spell,
And I may never return,
From under your spell,
For this I am stuck loving you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com