A New Style: Care to Comment?

Question: A New Style: Care to Comment!?

Al O!. Bar
A poetic star
And while he does eat meals
He writes on how he feels

This is my first attempt at a Clerihew (thanks Irish D)!.
Here is what it is: http://en!.wikipedia!.org/wiki/ClerihewWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

A lobe are
traveling far
through verse gustatorial
the enigmatic wisdom of an oracle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It loosely fits the definition
Try changing the 3rd line
it does not relate to or in some way connect
the 2nd or 4th line!. It is more of an aside
Pardon my ignorance but I have not found who
Al O!. Bar is and the style should poke fun at
"mostly famous people"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sir Isaac Newton
A rootin, tootin
Apple scientist!.
His pi's are best!.

(Do wish you'd quit coming up with these strange things! However, Clerihew might be a delightful name for a cat!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love your energy at trying poetry in ways I never heard of!.

There's this education I acquire just by making K Biscuit a contact!. Your words are like a battery wired to power and circuit my healing brain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

interesting 2 say the leastWww@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds cool!. Congrats & keep up the work!. Look up Aidence Harper, & please comment on my poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

kepp going!.!.!.!.!.!.why you stop so soon!?!?!?/Www@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, my first attempt:

F!. G!. Tank
I'd like to spank
But I don't like gas
So I'll have to pass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com