That
Heavenly
Aura lives
Nuturing me
Knowing of my pain
Yeilding to my struggle
Only speaking to soothe me
Understanding that I am youWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Heavenly Aura lives Nuturing me Knowing of my pain Yeilding to my struggle Only speaking to soothe me Understanding that I am youWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm still pondering over that last line!.!.!.!. gratitude must, if honest, be reciprocated!? gratitude feeds the giver as well as the receiver!? Human kindness, anyway--unfortunately becoming rarer and rarer--defined here!. Nit pick: i before e!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful acrostic!. Is this particular form that you have kept in your box of poetic form tricks!? I also love the meaning that gratitude has for you!. I often wish this world were not virtual, otherwise I could show my gratitude to these amazing people in more than words!. Thank YOU, your majesty!. Thank YOU!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is quite beautiful in form and meaning!. I find the last line thought provoking and evocative of the philosophy that all things are one!. Lovely, well thought out words and thoughts make this an outstanding poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Huh!? You lost me darn it!. You had me until the last word!. The last word loses meaning of what lies before!. Until then, my comment is s-u-c-c-e-s-s, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wonderful way of describing what Gratitude means to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com beautiful!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com |