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Question: I need a vacation!. Is this place poetic enough!?
Star Voyage
by Elaine P

Sailing high
on solar winds
deep in starlit
endless space,
we voyage
over heaven,
vast galaxies
our guides!.

Dancing wild
before us
they live and die
around us,
progeny of spacedust,
stars and planets
whirl en pointe
in graceful pirouette!.

Singing joy
in poetry,
we cling forever
to each other;
we have found
our home at last
in love that
conquers time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You are the compass!. This is very heady, euphoric!. I love it!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like this, quite a lot actually!.
As a lifelong fan of science/fantasy fiction and a lover of poetry, this ticks all the right boxes for me, so to speak!.
I'm currently re-reading, for the eleventy seventh time, "The Many- Coloured Land" by Julian May and your offering feels strangely apt!.
Don't know if you've read it, but I'd highly recommend it!.
Thanks for this one!.!.!.
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I came back just to answer your question!. You have always
given me such great comments and a lot of encouragement
on my so called poems!. You always made me feel that I gave It a good try!. But this poem Is very beautiful and full of hope for all of us!. I would love to find some of that "Endless Space'
Just to think about life!. I hope one day we all find peace with each other!. Whether It`s On Mars or Earth!. Good Job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am there already,
dancing midst the words,
in the land that you
and others of
like mind and spirit
have created!.
Gratitude waxes old,
so I shall not
platitude you to death,
but sing a sanguine rhapsody,
and join you
in your dance!.

Have a great vacation!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Take me, take me, please! I'm already packed (one toothbrush and my favourite teddy)

You just get better and better!.

I mean that second verse!.!.!.!.!.wow
This is what I meant by spiralling away like a dervish - (or wildly dancing with the stars)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Move over Flash Gordon, and all you other would be star travelers!. Space is booked, it is my space, and where I finish up is where I want to be!.

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh Elaine, this is so beautiful!. And yes, this place is poetic paradise!. Since we're relatives, is there any doubt that I would not come!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Elaine, I love it!. It's absolutely beautiful!. Will you take me with you!? I could seriously use such a vacation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love conquers hatred,
Light conquers darkness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The eternal ride, lovely to ponder and lovely your words to ponder it by!. My complimentsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Astral Travel will be the new Universal Enterprise in years to come!.!.!.!.!.why not start the trend now!? I love you words Elaine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Certainly sounds delightful! Packing my small suitcase!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wish I could join you: "whirl en pointe / in graceful pirouette"!. A dancing poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ditto what they all said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh yes, I would go there anyday! Great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll meet you there!. Wear a red rose behind your left ear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful writing!

May I come with you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com