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Question: Another poem!. Opiniions and crtiicism welcome!.!?
"armageddon"

With a newborn eye,
a paranormal mind!.
No living soul would dare,
cross over to my sick desire!.

Long ago I chose my path,
I love mercililess brutal rage!.
Yet still an ingenious way,
my gift to you and all humanity!.

There's no doubt that vilolence,
added to my carnal play!.
Combination of their peers,
the result, a climax of perfect death!.

My wife has seen their lives,
observed them all unknown!.
Extinction of mankind!.!.!.
she lives just like an ancient queen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its good!! I have no critisum!. XoxoWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love''WITH A NEWBORN EYE'' Your back and it`s ok by meWww@QuestionHome@Com