My poem "White Hunter" is is good?

Question: My poem "White Hunter" is is good!?

Its only a small poem i did quickly, please comment though :)

White Hunter

Sunken depths of darkness
Stalking, surviving, savaging
Stale flesh from pale white bone
Striving, swimming, starving
Soul white hunter luring of blood
A shadowing, striving, shark!.

I may add more to it but for now thats all i have!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Very deep, and I love the way you've written it!. I really like the first line; the phrase paints a really bleak picture, but captivating still!. It'll be nice if you do add to it, like more about what this hunter is longing for, besides survival, or even more about that!.
Well done though, and I like some of your other poems too - very intense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good so far, but I think you should change the line "Stale flesh from pale white bone"!. Did you mean 'steal flesh'!?
Will you please answer my question now!? I would really appreciate it! http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked it!. Your masterful use of adjectives holds powerful imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

HORRID!Www@QuestionHome@Com