Do you enjoy this style of free form prose?

Question: Do you enjoy this style of free form prose!?

Window curtains spare you the vision
Door locks erase the time on the other side
…in your room, all is still now!.

Your only fear is if you’ve done it right
And you believe the police will be fooled
…in your room, all is quiet now!.

The taste in your mouth is sulfuric
The tremble in your hands makes you feeble
…in your room, all is stagnant now!.

The gloom of Monday comeuppance
Wears heavy on your shallow chest
…in your room, get some needed rest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I feel like singing:

These boots are made for walking
And that's just what they'll do!.
One of these days these boots
Are gonna walk all over you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If that means what I think it means!.!.!.
AHHHHH haaaa HAAAA haaaa
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hang on a min!.!.!.
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Sorry for the delay
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Had to pick my *ss up!. I laughed it off and it bounced into the other room!.!.!.

"The gloom of Monday comeppance"!.!.!.
Priceless!.!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great poem!. Someone seems to be in for a surprise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ah, well done! I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I need some rest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one I think we've all been thereWww@QuestionHome@Com