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Question: Can you critique this poem for me!?
Please!.!.!.I need constructive criticism!. Go easy on me I'm only 15 haha!. :)
Every time I skim through that book,
Chaos clutters my mind!.
Unwieldy feelings rush through me,
My veins,
My heart,
My thoughts!.
Flipping fervently through thin pages,
Scouring for some kind of solution,
With significant certainty,
I had once known it to be true!.
But now it seems those words were miscontrued!.
Every aspect I placed under scrutiny,
Until I had an epiphany,
and realized!.
I could never have a testimony!.
If I had never endured a test!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very good
although, revealing what the poem is about makes it a little less challenging to analyze!. perhaps, if you change the first sentence the reader will be puzzled about the object you are talking about, then understand when you say; "Flipping fervently through thin pages,"!.
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It's pretty good!. One thing that can be said is- don't change your work do to my, or any other persons critizism!. Your work is special to YOU and you shouldn't change that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's very good!. You have promise of being a very talented poet even though you think otherwise maybe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a very good poem!.!.!.!.!.!.
especially for being only 15!.
I hope to see more from you!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
sorrr not goodWww@QuestionHome@Com