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Question: I wrote this poem last year and just found it today!.!.!.what do you think of it!?
Just a girl and her dog
Side by side
Walking along the beaten road
The sun in the sky
The wind in her hair
Just a girl and her dog
Walk alone
Not a cloud to be seen
Only the blue heavens of earth
And the sand between her toes
With an endless view of like ahead
Now the sky in pinks and grays
A warm night approaches
And still the girl and her dog
Walk side by sideWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Thank you for a beautiful memory
- for I was that "girl and her dog"
- and I never doubted the love
- nor the richness of companionship between us
- I took his nearness for granted
- till one day he lost his mind
- went mad
- and I had to say good-byeWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is wonderful!. I got distracted by the really annoying sumo cartoon thing to your right, so I had to start again!. Then I tried a few more times!. This is fun to read, which makes it great!. Well done!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is another example of how talented you are!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's amazing!. I really liked it!.
It's short and sweet and it's written from your heart =)

Good job on it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your good with poetry,i wish i could write like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you should write more AND SELL THEM FOSHO!!!!
????Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is really good poem!.!.!.we have been writing poems in the English class and i suck!.!.!.lol!.!.!. i really liked that one :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

kinda stupidWww@QuestionHome@Com

cool, just a girl taking a stroll with her troll!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nicee!.!.!.!. stupid theme though lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

well!.!.!.look at my avatar!.!.!.what do you think i think!.!.!.time for a walk with my best girl!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com