nothing
Nothing to write
Nothing to rhyme
Nothing in sight
No one to find
Nothing to see
Nothing to hear
No one to be
Nobody near
No time for nothing
Nothing for time
Time to do something
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Nothing to write Nothing to rhyme Nothing in sight No one to find Nothing to see Nothing to hear No one to be Nobody near No time for nothing Nothing for time Time to do something nothing in my mindWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Here is what makes it work: You have couplets that relate to each other, eg "Nothing in sight, No one to find," that kind of add insight to each other!. "No one to be / Nobody near" is another one!. Your second stanza is the best one!. The third needs the most work; it has meter problems, and "nothing in my mind" sort of hangs there!. Aside from that, it's muted but engaging!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i think this poem is amazing! i may not be a poet myself but i know a good poem when i hear one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's okay!. I like the concept but the meter seems a little off when you say "nobody near"Www@QuestionHome@Com As both a poet and a reader, a great success!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com it's goodWww@QuestionHome@Com |