Here is a poem that you should cry about. How is this.?

Question: Here is a poem that you should cry about!. How is this!.!?

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My life's lost, so confused!.
glad you seem so damn amused!.
Plot y end, my blood demsie,
Thoughts of you, I now despise!.

You used me onece
then thrown way!.
Tears I cry are oh so real!.
ugly things, i'll always feel!.

Lost all zeal, for the living,
the things I do, all the giving!.
I now count the reasons left,
looks to me, you can't care less!.

Counting reasons,I have left,
Beaten women, abused kids!.
Can you expalin your horrid kiss!?
sounds just like a rattler's hiss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Oh my God!. Whats up with all the haters!!? The nerve of some people!. If you can't say something nice than don't ******* say it!.

I thought it was good!. It tells what really happens in the world!. Makes me want to cry!.

Why are people so sick!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

meh!.!.!. what about that is supposed to make me cry!? Your misery is of no consequence!.

It has a very amateur sing-song quality in the meter and the rhymes seem forced!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just stop abusing women and also stop being a pedophile!. Get over your childhood abusive experience!. Stop threatening and inflicting harm upon others!. Start over a new life!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Boring! When are you going to get over yourself!. Sorry, Dude, you are not convincing me yet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I DON'T AGREE WITH YOUR ADDITIONAL DETAILS PRINCE!.YOU CAN NEVER FORCE US TO EVALUATE WHAT YOU WRITE!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it but i think you need and ending line that would make the poem more memorable!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

DP, What`s going on!? I`m starting to get worried!. Every-
thing will be OK!. Hang In!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it good workWww@QuestionHome@Com

beggining sounds like goth and rest is a little emo!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its good!.!. bit emo tho :S xWww@QuestionHome@Com

omg i love it dude its nice lol but work on spelling :) <3Www@QuestionHome@Com