A poem, like or dislike please choose?

Question: A poem, like or dislike please choose!?

Night

The moon peaks,
!.!.!.it's face from behind the trees!.
Bright and shiny,
!.!.!.full of its own glory!.
Wisps of clouds,
!.!.!.try to hide,
!.!.!.!.!.!.the evening star,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it beams hope through!.
I sit in the haze watching!.
Twinkling fireflies,
!.!.!.twist and turns,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.blinking messages,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.looking for a mate!.
Oh, how I envy their freedom,
!.!.!.!.may their search be fruitful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Both sections flow and speak well, but are to me still separate as if you put two thoughts together!. I like but would suggest making two separate poems to do each justice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep, pretty good, the only line a have a problem with is !.!.!.!.it beams hope through, somethings not quiet right but cant put my finger on it, but otherwise very nice, hope this helps, goodluck! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a wonderful poem Coop!. I like it very much!. The theme is positive and you wove a lovely word picture!. This is definitely a keeper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you mean peeks not peaks--the moon peeks it's face from behind the trees--and I think I see two poems in here!. I think you're very good!. Keep writing--you're very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

actually, I like this one!. it's fairly interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it just fine!. This is one of the better poems I have read todayWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! the rhymes and the thought are great!!

your a total genius dude!

keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes LIKE it's very nice!. I'd prefer it without the dots, but hey it's a great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do like it!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!. that's really all i can say is wow!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com