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Question: What do you think about this, my first attempt at poetry!?
Ode to a troll!.

Vaguely unsatisfied with life,
That guy is bigger than me don't make eye contact,
He's bigger but I bet he can't do mad programs like me,
Gym class is next and I hate it,
I wonder if Mom will make supper tonight,
maybe if she's not drinking again,
These people in class don't seem real,
just misty outlines of monsters,
I can't wait to get online with my real friends,
The power, Oh God the power!
The vikings must have felt like we do when they sacked a village,
Tonight we sack Answers!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There is beauty here!.
"just misty outlines of monsters"

Nice meter, and the image is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Realistic; sad; can visualize; keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sexy poem ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

my thought is!.!.

dark!.Www@QuestionHome@Com