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Question: Please appraise this poem please!!!!?
I wrote this to be an introduction to a novel I am writing!. It subtly tells the whole story in a mysterious way!. Tell me if you like it!.

Queen Eleanor of the Vampires

The children of my plight, destroyed by light
Lay under desecrated stones
Foiling their sadistic cries, subdued to moans
Cursed are my children to be forever alone

My husband, the King left for Prague that night
Leaving me with a broken promise
That he would take me hunting tonight
The stench rolled in and infection dimmed my light!.

The doctors attempt to cure my ailment
Fits and convulsions are my undead statement
Wolves are my pride, there milk I did drink
To bear me an heir of power, I did hope and think

Cold as stone, carted free but returned
To the resting place reserved for me
The peasant’s ignorance my death they did sire
They named me, Queen Eleanor of the VampiresWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Great poems!. I think you're very talented in writing poetry!. I bet the novel would be absolutely amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com