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Question: Poem help , please help me!?
ok , so my girlfriend and i have known each other for about a year and a half and weve been dating for about a month and a half and i draw her pictures all the time(we both love art) but this time i want to write her a poem but im not good at poems and i cant think of anything please help me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
well i write really good poems!.!.!. do u love her!?!?!?
cuz i have a really good one my boyfriend loves it!!
u can im me
babygirl_536866@yahoo!.com
or!.
APK4lyfe54@aim!.comWww@QuestionHome@Com

Think about what you like her about her, eg her eyes, the way she makes you laugh, her smile and try and focus on this as you write!. Think of fun things together and how you met and your hopes for the future!.

If you're still a bit unsure, try reading famous love quote for inspiration: http://www!.romantic-lyrics!.com/lovequote!.!.!.

Remember, it's the the thought that counts so even if you don't think you're poem is all that great I'm sure your girlfriend will be really touched that you did this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love you till the end of time
I love you since the start of rhyme
Forever we'll be till death do us part
And forever you'll stay in the depths of my heart!.

It's not that good, I can't do rhyming well, but I made it up on the spot and you can use it if you want!. No copyrights I promise!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

watching you breathe,
watching you sleep,
watching you wander
into a dream
no worries, no fears,
no cares in the world
seems like all of lives problems
vanish in a whirl,
as I lie there and wait
for dusk to turn light
I think to myself
"ive never seen such a beautiful sight"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Look what you really need to do is, tell the girl how you really feel and how you feel so great when your with her

or a poem:
Roses are red vilets are blue for me and you love is true when im with you the sky turns blueWww@QuestionHome@Com

When your heartbeats I feel it!.
I known when you are angry,sad,depressed,happy!.
I feel we share the same heart!.
The same soul and I can't let go or leave you alone!.
I will never let you go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You should write from your heart!. Tell her how you really feel!. In some poems ryming doesn't really matter!.!.!. It's the thought that counts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WRITE WHAT YOU HONESTLY FEEL!.USE YOUR OWN WORDS AND LET THEM COME FROM YOUR HEART!.SHE WILL LOVE THEM!.YOUR MAIN AIM IS TO PLEASE HER,RIGHT!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

roses are red
vilots are blue
surger is sweet
And So Are YouWww@QuestionHome@Com