Poem check?

Question: Poem check!?

All I have to say
I write in six short lines:
Never love me, never leave me
And may your love be blind
These emotions just a craze
The echoes of archaic ways
If I should call you my honey, my baby
I hope you run- love's not a maybeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Brill

suggestion:

Never love me, never leave me
May your blind love not deceive me
These emotions just a craze
The echoes of archaic ways
If I should ever call you baby
Vow or run - love's not a maybeWww@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like you want the guy in the poem, but are afraid to let him in!. And if you do you want it to last forever and are hoping that he feels the same, but you aren't sure!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful! <applause>

Very lovely poem, well phrased!

Keep up the Great Writing! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Iloved this poem!.structure was good and the rhyming was brill too:D great work on here and the flow was great xWww@QuestionHome@Com

AMAZIN i was so touched by that!.!. reallyWww@QuestionHome@Com

your right

keep writing good lines/vercesWww@QuestionHome@Com