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Question: A Visual: Care to Comment!?
My mother was upset
when she saw this on
my test
when I
tried my very best
I studied very hard
and yet
she saw
A failure
what is
mother's
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Dude! (sorry for the vernacular) This is completely amazing!. I love visual poetry, but it's so hard to do on this site!. (The tab button doesn't work, dammit) But this is amazing!. As for your mother's problem!.!.!.well, you got an F, that pretty much explains everything!. Great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sorry you flunked the test, but the poem is wonderful! Keep writing poetry !.!.!. because you sure didn't flunk that !.!.!. I'll give you an A+!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Haha that's pretty funny, but the last 2 lines sound a bit funny (odd kind of funny haha)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is excellent!. The words work with the shape very well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Haha this is pretty funny

sometimes its true

did u make it up yourself!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

OK, there is hope for me!. I get this one! You wouldn't by chance be trying to "F"lip me off would you!? lol Good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

she dont think you trie!.!.!.!.d but i know you did :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm very deep!.!. i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is cool!. I'll give you an A for your F ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com