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Question: A rewrite of this poem from Gspoetry!.com Is this evil enough!.!?
"tears of blood"


All sround me gray and clay,
Shadows stretch so far away!.

Beneath the crypt, footsteps tread,
here they live, the sleepless dead!.

Demons rape,as they laugh,
night is born with sweat and wrath!.

Autumn leaves i dream of you,
Darkness craved, blood turns blue!.

Sweet black gray, colors my soul,
hells dark demons, hearts of coal!.

Tears of blood drip on my crypt,
every drop from hell I'm ripped!.



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yeah I love the color black!! LOL its a great poem!. It somewhat reminds me of the Cask of Ararrillo or whatever by Edgar Allen Poe!! I love it Steve!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

NO, IT IS NOT EVIL!.I REALLY ENJOY WHAT YOU WRITE !.PLAGIARIZE OR REWRITE OR EVEN WRITE YOUR OWN!.WHATEVER YOU WRITE SEEMS INTERESTING BECAUSE YOU ARE TALENTED AND KNOW WHAT TO OFFER TO THE READERS!.HOWEVER,WHY DO YOU LOVE THE MELANCHOLY AND DARK SIDES OF POETRY!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dark enough for me!. I can feel and see the evil!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

GOOD poem!.I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

haha!.!. that's great!.!. xDWww@QuestionHome@Com