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Question: For Tehseen!. Maybe this is palgarized too!. idiots!. How is this!.!?
"domain"

Within these dark and brittle walls!.
I write these lines, these solemn calls!.
In my domain of silent dead decay,
Words tumble down like soil beneath!.
Embrace, Enfold, Besiege and bathe,
My domain!.
Within thes dark and bloody walls,
How can I be human, I feel fall!.
They say they are blind,
Smearing ashes across cracked glass;
I my forest of harbored thoughts,
Demons lust inside my mind!.
I entrust myself to the lure,
Cancer has no real cure!.
I'm leaving this existence behind
No more chances, left to find!.




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I hope I`m not missing something here!. I love, WITHIN THE
DARK AND BLOODY WALLS'' AND SMEARING ASHES ACROSS CRACKED GLASS''Www@QuestionHome@Com

I not sure what you mean!. Since I'm no idiot, you must be talking to someone else!. So far, I've seen 3 or 4 of your pieces!. They are strong, but all similar!. What else you got!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like forest of harbored thoughts thats good way of discribing something and i like i write these lines that solemn callWww@QuestionHome@Com

PLAGIARIZED IS THE WORD!. PALGARIZED IS WRONG!.HOW CAN WE ASSES WHAT YOU WRITE WHEN WE ARE IDIOTS!?AT LEAST SHOW US SOME RESPECT!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow they just keep gettin betterWww@QuestionHome@Com