Labyrinthine walls, Another poem?

Question: Labyrinthine walls, Another poem!?

Hey guys ^^ My first attempt at a prog-rock song :)

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One word re-write, ah no, I'm not being callus, but it is a tad shallow pop-phyc examination on the subject, great emotion though, keep working on it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com