Who Made The World: A Song. Do You Like It?

Question: Who Made The World: A Song!. Do You Like It!?

Who Made The World By Jay, "The Silver Bells"

Who made the rainbow
Who made the sea
Who made the black crow
Sitting on the tree

Who made the sunshine
Who made the breeze
Who made the grapevine
Budding for the bees

Who made the mountains
Who made the hills
Who made the fountains
And the flowing rills

Who made the white pup
Who made the rain
Who made the life's cup
Full with joy and pain

Who made the world so
Beautiful to see
God made the world oh
God, the almightyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I is confused!.

FULL of JOY and PAIN
Dactylic!?
My recollection of dactylic is
Suu
that line and the other L4's seem to me to be 1 amphimacic foot combined with 1 iambic foot!.
SuS uS
Of course I could be mistaken, could you please see if you can clarify my thinking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful poem!. In the last verse, the emphasis is on the last syllable of "almighty," which is unusual in English!. Maybe you can find another word!. Other than that, I love the imagery and the poetic questions!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is almost genius!. It bucks and jumps, a little!.

It's a whimsy, so a fairy-tale like ease of reading is very important!. For me, the L-4's are one beat too long!. I had to argue with the crow and the bee!.

"Sit in the tree"
"Buzz full of bees"

Just my opinion!.
TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it! I just wish i had the tune so I could sing to it! Im a Christian so I litsen to that kind of stuff!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.and country!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really love this!. It gives me that ooey gooey feeling inside, which is when I know I am reading a very good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i wish i could hear it!.!.!.its beautiful!. thanks for sharing that :)Www@QuestionHome@Com